tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8155750565051087764.post3797246653932744855..comments2009-06-25T13:28:13.097-07:00Comments on UK OK! - Geri Sanders: Treatments for sleepwalkingGerihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00131645162727145734noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8155750565051087764.post-2039002646817124962009-06-10T16:03:17.739-07:002009-06-10T16:03:17.739-07:00Hi Geri,
Looks like you have quite a bit of work ...Hi Geri,<br /><br />Looks like you have quite a bit of work to do - remember that we need 12 blog posts by the end of the course. So far, so good, though: you seem to have the general idea.<br /><br />Some feedback on the writing (for this post only): my comments and corrections are in [brackets]. A few minor verb tense problems, otherwise it all looks fine.<br /><br />"The media have given lots of attention to bizarre accidents[] which [were] the result of sleepwalking lately. Only last week a thirty-three year old woman was acquitted of the charge of suffocating her very own mother by pushing a pillow onto her face. In a reaction to the acquittal, in this article some useful [tips for potential] precautions are given, in order to show the reader how they can prevent unfortunate accidents from happening. The easiest [measures to take are closing] the bedroom door or [closing] the windows. In the worst scenario medication should be prescribed. <br /><br />My boyfriend’s little son of eight years old sleepwalks occasionally. We [] put a wet towel on the floor of his bedroom the other day, so that he would wake up if he stepped on it. I think he has not been sleepwalking ever since. So, there are fairly easy ways to take precautions. With children it is often only a temporary habit. I had not realised that sleepwalking occurs among adults as well. I guess it does not run in my own family. It is rather strange[] to think of it; one half of the brain is awake, while the other half is asleep.Koenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00830549486814122844noreply@blogger.com